Warrior Princess

Oh my gosh. I love this. It's so lovely and deceptively simple. It reminds me of some poet, but I can't seem to remember who. :( It seems to paint ...

So, considering our usernames, you must be like my long-lost younger sister or something? :D Haha. Anyways, great poem! Do you know, I have the weirdest obsession with hands....when I ...

Hello, my sweet. Being one of the few here who knows the backstory for this poem, methinks I understand it a little better. You portray the emotions very well: hurt, ...

First to review!!! Yeeeeeaaaaahhhh baby!!!!! I can't even begin to tell you how much I loved this play. It was HILARIOUS; I laughed out loud several times while reading it. ...

Aw, this is such a sweet little poem! The one thing I might change is, I might say "loves" ath the beginning, since you use the plural noun "joys" at ...

Aw, pretty! It kinda reminded me of Owl City. Some people might grouse about the colors but I like them. Rather enhances the effect, in my opinion. One thing I ...

This is great. Not just for a novice. For anyone. Has a great flow for free form. I especially like how every few lines you have the single word line. ...

A nice little poem. I unfortunately am having to deal with just such a guy at the moment, so I feel your pain. :P One small nitpick: "after my eyes ...

I really like this. I like the emotion and the images depicted; it was sad, sweet, and a bit creepy at the same time. And do I detect a bit ...

Well this is incredible. That's about all I can say. It's creepy, frightening, and beautiful. It doesn't spell everything out exactly, but leaves you to wonder about some things. That, ...

I like this poem a lot. And since I'm Warrior Princess and everyone knows I'm generally too lazy and benevolent to actually critique anything, I shall leave it at this: ...

This is good. The imagery is quite beautiful, actually: kind of soft and gentle, yet powerful. I was a little startled by the first line of the second stanza (haha), ...

Okay hun, well clearly everyone else has torn this lovely little work to shreds, therefore there's not much for me to say here other than I liked it and I ...

Why hello there my dear; I am Warrior Princess the Mockingjay, and I will be reviewing this lovely tidbit of fanfiction today! :D To begin with, I love the idea ...

Whoa. That was like....good. Obviously it resembled prose more than it did poetry, and occassionally you'd have a line break in a strange place, but I was impressed. The poem ...